Shimmering luster, let me try, let me reach you
Layers beyond layers of red, all aglow
With trembling fingers I touch... Flimsy tissue
It comes down upon me, folding high into low
I dance with abandon, with no inhibition,
Entangled in fabric, I can no longer flee
Can't breath, for now I can see the strange fusion
Now I know: this tissue is me
My poem is inspired by my art: here is a set three panels, three oil paintings. I offer it to your interpretation, if the figures are dancing out of joy, or getting themselves tied in utter frustration... When I painted the picture, I likened the red fabric to chewing gum on the floor, into which you step and can never release yourself. The more you fight to free yourself, the more you become entangled.
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Volume I & II, woven together:
"A feast for the armchair psychologist.
Reveals insights that can touch and frighten each of us"
The chewing gum of relationships--a neat idea
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheila!
DeleteYou know that a formal poem works when you have read it, captivated, and not noticed form or rhyme until a second or third reading. Thanks also for the explanation from idea to creation.
ReplyDeleteThank you The Aquablogger! I wrote the poem only this morning...
DeleteInner turmoil.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Bill.
Delete"I dance with abandon, with no inhibition,
ReplyDeleteEntangled in fabric, I can no longer flee
Can't breath, for now I can see the strange fusion
Now I know: this tissue is me"
Just amazing lines...matching to the concept.What a realistic art.The figures factually provokes erotica in men.
Thank you so much, Charudutta
DeleteThe issue is the tissue
ReplyDeletenot the "is" nor me.
Greetings!
Lovely, Kar! Spoken like a poet.
DeleteWonderful work, Uvi. All success to you!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Lynn!
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