Saturday, December 8, 2012

For Those who Enjoy More Elegant Things in Life

If you have read any of his books, you know that his pen oozes incredibly hilarious humor. Oleg Medvedkov is the author of Take a Break & Have a Laugh Series. Passionate Mind-Control Worms, Cool Cats of Fortune, The Art of Getting a Sandwich and more. Just this morning he posted this review for Home:

5.0 out of 5 stars A fine book for those who enjoy more elegant things in life, December 7, 2012
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I admit, this is only an opinion of a man who abandoned poetry long time ago in order to write silly jokes and, what one could only hope, snappy punchlines. Those with more artistic souls would probably have a much better definition of what the poetry is for them, with finer words inserted in all the strategically correct places to maximize the emotional and intellectual impact. If I had that talent, I'd still be a poet. Instead, I am reduced to being a critic of the works of others. Let's see how it works out.

I liked this piece, it's called "This is the Place":

This is the place where he put pen to paper...
But clung to the wall, the shelves are now bare
All that remains of his words is but vapor
All you can spot is but a dent in his chair

Simple words, tight syllabic rhyme. The timing of the second line is standing out and creates the feeling of being unsettled and expectation of something looming just beyond the wall. Second stanza continues in the same way but the third and fourth stanzas switch to two and two type of rhyme without the emphasis:

He used to sit here, here he would stare
Years come, years go, an old clock keeping score,
He would scribble his notes, crumple them in despair
Waiting for his savior-- but locking that door

The poem above was written by Uvi Poznansky. Now a sample of the poem by her father, Zeev Kachel:

My first art teacher was the chill
The chill that painted forests and cities
Across my window pane, with icicles and frost

Please keep in mind, this is a translation. It's written in an expressive tradition of the Eastern European school and reminds me slightly of the later poetry of Alexander Blok. Another fine example:

I'm a different man today.
Not the one you know
You can come back
If you will.

I'm a different man today, without a hat I go
But in my heart-- there's still.
I'm a different man.

The splattered rhyme and short lines accentuate the impact of these simple words. I rather like it. I think that being a guy, I respond more to the power of the works of Zeev Kachel. Of course, Uvi Poznansky was the one who translated them so she gets just as much credit here.

There are also a few short stories written by Uvi. Her prose is written in high Literary writing style, present tense and all the inner explorations of the characters one could hope for. I would so wish this author would try to write something like a detective novel, or perhaps a romantic story. Letting her hair down and not worrying about arranging her sentence in a perfect order to create the word picture that is as esthetically pleasing to look at as it sounds... Perhaps then we could see what Uvi Poznansky can really do with her prose. Nothing against any of the pieces here, they are all fine bits of writing; just an idle curiosity of a book critic who is wondering what else this author is capable of.

This is a fine book for those of us who do enjoy more elegant things in life. The cover art alone is probably worth the price of admission.

Thursday, December 6, 2012

Here is a Story of Secrets and Family Conflicts

I am so lucky that my work has engaged this amazingly fast reader with a sharp perception of story and execution. Being an avid reader Cynthia J. Smith consumes ten books a week, this in addition to being a truck driver and the author of Voices in My Head. Here is the review she posted for my novel Apart From Love:
5.0 out of 5 stars perfect title, December 6, 2012
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This book starts with the perfect title. Apart from love is a phrase used by all three of the main characters and its meaning is slightly different for all three. Amazing.

This story is written by Lenny but, he uses Ben's and Anita's words as they seem to narrate.

A story of secrets, family conflicts and confusion. Each of the characters has a stumbling block which keeps them unable to love or be loved.

Ben is the son who is estranged from his father due to the fact that his mother left. Even after he discovers why she left, he still can't seem to figure out how to get his father's love which he so needs. He hides in plain sight and cannot just come forward.

Anita is Lenny's mistress at first then his second wife. She comes from a slightly abusive family and has no real idea what love is. She only knows what she wants is safety and prestige. To be a wife! She becomes mistress to Lenny knowing he is married. She assumes her beauty will make him love her and replace his wife.

Lenny is just lost in his love for his first wife and the secret he must keep from all. He tries to write the story in the hopes that if he gets it just right, life will return to the way it was.

The ending was so amazing!

Uvi has written a poignant story. I am truly amazed by the depth of each of her characters.

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

How Does Home Hang Down Under

My friend, the amazingly talented Australian artist and the author of Sydney's Song Ia Uaro ordered my poetry book from Amazon, as an end-of-the-year gift for Dr Rada, who is a Polish Jew and--get this!--became fascinated with Japanese at an early age, and now teaches the language. The Aussie-Japanese-Polish connection. How neat is that! 

Ia shared with me the image of Home as it arrived at her place! Here is how it hangs 'down under':


On a different note, the reference librarian in Santa Monica Public Library wrote this to me:

"Thank you for contacting the Santa Monica Public Library about the book, Home. Our materials selection staff has decided to add this title to the collection.  Please be aware it can take several weeks before added items are available for checkout."

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Sunday, December 2, 2012

A Glimpse of my Story, I Am What I Am

Living in the UK, Bella Harte is the author of YA paranormal fiction, who writes a great book blog. I am thrilled that she featured my work and my interview back to back, first on her Saturday Showcase and then on Talking with Uvi on the Sunday Spotlight. 

On Saturday, she featured an excerpt from my novel, Apart From Love. Here is an excerpt out of that excerpt: 

His silence is new to me. It’s like, shouting from the walls. And what I read into it is like, if I didn’t show so much leg back then, when he first laid eyes on me, ten years ago in that ice cream shoppe, and if I didn’t wear them hot pink, high heel shoes, which forced him, somehow, to lose his head over me—which could never have happened otherwise—then things would be totally different now:
Nothing would end up tearing this family apart, and instead, the piano would still be crouching in place, and Natasha, his first wife, would still be here to play it—or at least, to pass her hand fondly over its back, and twiddle her fingers when she’s done checking for dust, and smiling to herself, because like, all’s well. All would be just fine.


To read the entire excerpt, please go to her 
Saturday Showcase.


Then on Sunday, she interviewed me about my work, and allowed me to offer a first glimpse of my new story, I Am What I Am. The excerpt starts as follows:

Lying still in a corner of the cave, I try my best not to rattle, not to betray my fear. I figure, as long as they think me unconscious, I am safe. I have jolted awake because of the voices, only to discover they are incoherent and muffled. In between the gusts of wind, I can hear them hissing. Each phrase plays out in some verbose foreign music, which I cannot decipher for the life of me. Sigh. This is not Aramaic for sure, or any of the other languages spoken by the locals in my village or by the merchants traveling through along the Jordan river. 
It feels as if something has been taken away from me. My breath? My name? Identity? Who am I, then?
After an eternity, the confusion in my head starts clearing up. I stare at the thick soup of blackness around me. I listen. I catch a word here and there, and somehow I get it. No longer is it Greek to me. Or perhaps it is.
“But why? What is she to you?” says a trembling, shaky voice. “Why even come here for her? Just a beggar, is what she is.”
And in grumble—louder than the whirlwind—another voice says, “Now, who are you to ask?”
“Forgive me... I am nothing, nothing before you. Crush me if you will. I am dust, dust under your feet... But you, you have more important things to do. Let her rot.”
“Gird up now your loins like a man; for I will demand of you, and you shall answer me. Where were you when I laid the foundations of this realm? Declare, if you have any understanding! Who has laid the measures thereof, if you know? Or who has stretched the line upon it?”
“I bow,” says the first. “I bow before you. Oh please, forgive me.”
And splosh! I hear the poor devil plodding away, wading through some slush. A minute later, the footfalls of the other march up the road in the other direction, until finally the ground under me stops rumbling.
So I turn on my belly and crawl, finding my way in the dark, till at last I peek out—if only by a nose—through the mouth of the cave. Which allows me, for the first time, to take in the view.

To read the entire interview, I invite you to go to Talking with Uvi on the Sunday Spotlight.

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Saturday, December 1, 2012

Not with a Rambling, but with a Roar!

Ashley Fontainne is an avid reader of classic literature. She is also the author of Zero Balance, Accountable to None, and Ramblings of a Mad Southern Woman, and the host of a Blog talk radio show called the WriteStuff, which is coming to its close this weekend (to be replaced with a new show.) I have read Ashely's poetry, and trust me--her writing is no rambling, it is a full throated roar! 

So I am truly honored that she invited me to her radio show for this special episode, to talk about Apart From Love, Home, my sculptures and paintings, the new possibilities of publishing in this new Indie era, and more.  Come take a listen to our conversation:

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The Next Big Thing: I Am What I Am

What is the Next Big Thing? It is a way to 'pass the baton', if you will, between the new writers of today, allowing each one of them in turn to give an insight about her upcoming work, then tag her fellow writers to do the same. This time I was tagged by the inspired poet Bathsheba Daily. So here is a glimpse into my work, just published in Twisted:


What is the working title of your story?


I am thrilled to tell you about my story I Am What I Am. Here is a little secret: this title has a double meaning. Well, what do you expect? I have been accused of having a wickedly twisted mind, just because I enjoy coming up with a good riddle...  So, you may ask, what is the first meaning? And what is the second one?

Wait... Not so fast... I will tell you, but you will have to hold your breath for just a little while...

Where did the idea come from for the story?


This book is a spin on the story of the Book of Job. Job is in the center of a monumental bet between God and Satan. Will he, Job, succumb under pressure and curse heaven? His wife, who like many women in the bible remains nameless, spurs him to put an end to his torture. In my story she also seeks to restore her own life into the pages of history. She is a woman with balls, and for this she is punished, and finds herself in hell. 

"Lying still in a corner of the cave, I try my best not to rattle, not to betray my fear. I figure, as long as they think me unconscious, I am safe. I have jolted awake because of the voices, only to discover they are incoherent and muffled. In between the gusts of wind, I can hear them hissing. Each phrase plays out in some verbose foreign music, which I cannot decipher for the life of me. Sigh. This is not Aramaic for sure, or any of the other languages spoken by the locals in my village or by the merchants traveling through along the Jordan river.

It feels as if something has been taken away from me. My breath? My name? Identity? Who am I, then?"

What genre does your story fall under?


For this story, I am at a loss to define it... It is a biblical-hellish genre, spiced with a dash of dark humor, which oddly enough may leave you with an after-taste of philosophical ruminations.

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?


For the role of Job's wife I would choose Angelina Jolie, and for the role of Satan—Billy Bob Thornton. With this in mind listen to this dialog, described by Job's wife:

He turns a page, which has been earmarked, and from the top he quotes, “Then said his wife unto him, Dost thou still retain thine integrity? Curse God, and die.”

“Yes,” I say under my breath. “This I said.”

“A clever woman you are! Job should have listened to you.”

I shake my head, No. No.

“Had he cursed God, I would have won this bet, this maneuver, as you call it,” he says. “Ah, sweet victory! How close it came to be! Too bad he denied you, denied me...”

“What did I do?” I ask, as if I were innocent.

“Woman, you must have known,” says Satan, pointing at me, at the cavity around my heart, “you were my accomplice!”

“No,” I refuse to agree with him. “I was feeling sorry for Job. My only sin, sir, is impatience. Anything—even death—is better than this hurt, this unrelenting torture. I wanted it to stop. Let it stop, stop already!”

“Don’t lie to me now,” he says. “The truth is simpler. You wanted to be free.”

What is the one-sentence synopsis of your story?


Job's wife, known for urging her husband to 'curse God and die' is condemned to a nameless existence in the afterlife, and so she is on a mission to recover her identity; but the price she would have to pay the Prince of Darkness for it may be too heavy for her.

Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?


My book will be self published.


How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?


At first I hesitated for several months to step into this universe. But then all hell broke loose, and the characters simply formed in my mind, and demanded to be given a voice. So I ended up letting them out by writing furiously around the clock for a week, and then refining and rewriting for two more weeks.

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?


I have not read other books in this biblical-hellish genre. I may be delusional, but to me it is the first of its kind... 

Who or What inspired you to write this story?


Thinking about the struggle between the light and dark side in our souls, which finds it visual symbol in heaven and hell, directed me towards the bet between God and Satan over the soul of a man. Then Janet Morris, the creator of the Hell series, made a comment to me that 'Job's wife is not important enough for Satan to engage in conversation with her.' I thought, why the hell not?

So the first meaning of I Am What I Am is finding a way to accept her fate, the fate of a nameless woman. The second meaning is a play on the explicit name of God, which in the biblical Hebrew means, I Shall Be What I Shall Be.

What else about your story might pique the reader’s interest?


Alas, the main character is deceased, which turns this into one of the quirkiest stories I have written. As I stepped into her skin, I was reminded of this figure, who sprung out of my head onto a crumpled piece of brown paper, wearing nothing but animal bones to shield herself. It makes for a strange combination of strength and fragility on the outer side, which conceal her inner softness. Here she is, directing a sharp gaze at you: 



Now it’s my turn to tag people. Please visit their blogs. They will be publishing their answers to the same questions next week.

And now, the small print: a message for the tagged authors and interested others: 
Rules of The Next Big Thing:
  • Use this format for your post 
  • Answer the ten questions about your current WIP (Work In Progress) 
  • Tag five other writers/bloggers and add their links so we can hop over and meet them.

Ten Interview Questions for The Next Big Thing:
  • What is the working title of your book?
  • Where did the idea come from for the book?
  • What genre does your book fall under?
  • Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
  • What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
  • Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
  • How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
  • What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
  • Who or What inspired you to write this book?
  • What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
  • Include the link of who tagged you and this explanation for the people you have tagged.
Be sure to line up your five people in advance.

Friday, November 30, 2012

When Love was Complicated and Furious

I am truly moved by this review of Apart From Love, written by one of my earliest readers, Angela Davis, whose poems I have been following for the last few months:

5.0 out of 5 stars incredible read!, May 26, 2012
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Apart From Love is an inspiring novel by an amazing woman who is a writer, poet, sculptor, painter, and more. This novel spurred me to write again, and delved into my soul in a way that no other novel has done in many years. The intensity of characters, and their interconnections with one another, will entrance the reader, and remind us of the times when love was complicated and furious, yet honest and real. The voices of the primary characters are genuine and touching, and the story will encapture even the most jaded persons. A true voice here, a brilliant search into what can be and what truly is.