While I was writing Virtually Lace from the point of view of my protagonist, Michael, I became engaged with his girlfriend, Ash, who helps him solve a murder mystery. As soon as the book was published, Ash took over and started telling me an earlier chapter of her life, when she was in coma, listening to her visitors in the ER. One of them is Michael. Is he connected, in some way, to the crime that put her in the hospital?
The air between us seems to warm up as he draws closer. Boy, am I glad that earlier this morning, the nurse removed my nasal mask. It’s a small improvement, but an important one, in more ways than one: first, I have no need for a medical ventilator to push air mechanically into my lungs. Second, I can catch his smell. And third, I look a bit more presentable. Or so I hope.
Without the benefit of a lipstick, it’s too late to consider any style other than au naturel. Part of me hates being vain. The other part knows—even without a mirror—that with all the bruises, which make my face tender, this is not my preferred look.
Hovering just over my chest, Michael gasps.
If only I could wrap my arms around him. If only I could give him some comfort.
He touches the bandages around my chin, my temple, and murmurs to me, “Are you there, sweetheart?”
Short of answering, how can I respond? Any movement—small as it may be—would be a victory, a meaningful victory over this state of paralysis.
First, I try to expand my ribcage, hoping that he may feel it against his cheek. Breathe, I tell myself. Breathe deep.
Nothing.
Next, I try to rub elbows with him. I mean, really. When that doesn’t work, I try to move my wrist, my thumb, the tip of my forefinger.
Nothing.
At last, I try to flutter my eyelashes.
Nothing. All in vain.
By the change in pressure at the side of my mattress, I feel him lifting away his elbows. His hair whooshes over me. He must be shaking his head.
“Oh, Ash,” he says, before his voice dies down into despair.
A tear wells up at the corner of my eye. I think it escaped his attention. Perhaps he’s burying his face in his hands.
Yes, his voice is muffled. “Maybe it’s best that you’re asleep,” he says. “Clearly, this is not the right time to bother you with my problems.”
Problems? What problems?
He groans. “It’s hard, being accused of a crime. You, of all people, know I didn’t do it. Or maybe I’m mistaken. Maybe even you can’t be sure.”
I consider shrugging, but before I can find a moment to work on that, Michael adds something that is nothing short of strange.
“In a sense,” he says, “this crime may be my responsibility.”
I’m about to scream, “Say what?”
“I think I could have prevented it.”
★ Love Suspense? Go for the ride ★
Ash finds herself in the ER diagnosed with coma. She has no memory of what has happened to her, but what she can do--despite what everyone around her might think--is listen to the conversations of her visitors. Will she survive the power outage in the hospital and then, being kidnapped out of it?
Haunted by discovering the body of a beautiful dancer, Michael sets out to create a virtual reality simulation of her murder. Can he bring the mystery to life? Can he solve its clues in time, before the killer turns on the woman he loves, Ash?
The author created a strong plot and an equally strong character in Ashley. She's in the hospital, recovering from the trauma of having been beaten. We get to hear from her while she's in a comatose state. She desperately wants to reveal who's responsible for her injuries, but she's unable to get the sound to come out. The thug enters the picture again. I don't wish to say how - you'll have to read the story to experience the suspense firsthand. This fast-paced thriller has a huge surprise ending that I didn't see coming and it's absolutely priceless.
The author draws you right into the character's story. I've never been in a coma, and God forbid I ever am, but I was hospitalized for nine days last year and in ICU doctors and nurses treated me like I wasn't even there when they had conversations with my husband, so I can identify with what that feels like. It's not pleasant. However, i was able to speak up, but because she is in a coma, she can't. All because of a thug wanting a program a high-school student wrote years ago about shutting down a electrical power grid, she was beaten and raped, ending up in a coma in the hospital. Then, she's kidnapped from the hospital during an electrical outage. I enjoyed the story and was able to relate to parts of it. It is a quick, easy read. Ash was my favorite character, and I loved her golden retriever, Browny. I'm a dog lover. I could relate to how the dog acted from missing her while she was gone. Mine missed me when I was in the hospital. The suspense involves her family and her dog as well. If you enjoy mystery and suspense, check out this series. This is the second book I've read in it, and I enjoyed both.BJ Robinson, Author
